TA Meeting

i had my first TA Meeting today. for one of my English class we have to give our TA a piece we are working on and then he gives us feed back on it.
i have been working on the story about foster kids.
They day i was suppose to give it to him i totally forgot, so i handed him what i had. unfortunately, it was not previewed by me yet, so there were a lot of mechanical errors- i also put my writing on this blog in the same fashion.
other than that he really liked my work! he said i captured the feeling, and he liked the jumping around, but i would need to work on helping the reader understand were they where in time.
Why am i telling you this? because i am going to be editing the old posts, the same time i am editing the story, so i might have the same subject matter up twice, but one will just be the edited version.
hope you are all like my writing. this is the first time i am actually writing stories, so please be judgmental (but not idiots)